Wednesday, September 17, 2008

LOTF Blog #3

[Chapt. 3] Title: My secret spot
Simons Journal

I have been on this island for a few now I am not so fond of this island although it has a lot of fruit that I can have or eat. I was having vicissitudes builing these huts only with ralph. I was not the only one besides Ralph who was tired of Jack not participating in the building. I was sweating because of working so hard.

Finally Jack came back and Ralph was the first to confront Jack of why he was not working and how difficult this was with only two people. All the littluns were playing while me Ralph were building. At first Ralph was very inscrutable when he was talking. I poked my head out and they were fighting again. The conversation had great compulsion to it. Jack kept on saying we need meet, from my perspective I was doing fine without meet. Back and forth they yelled at eachother I could not take it.

I instantly heard the littluns, I glanced over and saw the littluns trying to get fruit. I wanted to be generous and help them maybe grab some fruit for them. While I was helping I could hear Jack and Ralph coming, I bolted into the forest.

I could see tendril leaves hanging i went inside, it was like my very own secret spot where I can be alone. The little cubby whole was very opaque so I peaked my head out and I got a pretty good view of the boys (Jack and Ralph). So I decided to just stay there asnd later I will go back and work on the huts some more once they leave.

[Chapt. 4] Title: The sight of the ship
Simons Journal

Still working hard on our houses, almost finished. Me and ralph actually finished all by ourselves with no help. I was glanicing over at the litluns there was a blatant noise coming from them. I saw that Roger and Maurice were stomping at the littluns castle with great belligerence. Then once they were done Roger decided to throw stones at him but surprisingly he was not really aming for him.

Once I was done I heard Ralph and Piggy yell SHIP! I ran out and saw the ship, then I saw them look up at the mountain I did the same there was no smoke, nobody was watching the fire. The were yelling malevolently. They went up to the fire before they could there the fire was out. Jack came running up with very wierd paintings on his face and then I saw SamnEric carrying meat. I was happy that they caught meet but at the same time mad that there was no smoke. Ralph got very mad that he was not watchign the fire they got so close they looked liek they were going to fight Ralph had only a few words to say and said it with graet belligerence. He told him to make another fire. While Jack just kept saying we got meet.

They started gather wood they needed Piggy's specs again his he was not happy but he gave it to them. As soon as they were done Piggy snached them out of Jack's hand. Jack got very angry he hit Piggy with great force knocking him over and breaking his glasses. He was yelling "you broke my specs". Jack had nothign to say I was very shocked by this. After all the rage was done we ate everybody got some but Piggy, I decided to give him some. Jock snatched the meet away and gave it back to me and pretty much made me eat it so I picked and did as he told me. Once we were Ralph had one thing to say "meeting will be now"

2 comments:

Rachel said...

Another great post Lexi! You have a few spelling errors though. I really liked how you told the story of why Simon went into the forest, how he didn't want to see the two boys fighting. I also really like paragraph 3. How he heard the littleuns and helped, and how he found he spot. Another things is that you titles are really good!

lindsay m said...

you described them all great. I didnt know that we had to split them up into chapter 4 and 5 or 3 and 4 i forget. I just did it as one whole thing. I like you you described what happened up on the mountain about the specs, and the pig
good job