The boys and the fire
Piggy's Journal
Once the boys got back we all gathered into meating to figure out what was going to happen. They seemed very officious to speak. The first thing ralph said was whoever is holding the conch is the one that gets to talk. What we were talking about is how we were going to get others to see us such boats passing by. Then all of a sudden a young boy came out and asked for the conch so he could speak.
The little boy had great ebullience among him you could tell he wanted to speak. Once he got the conch all the others started to talk whie he was speaking. I went to go help him just to make sure that they could hear him and make sure they heard it just in case it was really important. I induced everbody to listen. The little boy fspoke of a beastie from what he spoke it sounded like a snake. Of course none of the boys listened to him you could bearly hear him.
After the meating was over the other boys decided to build a fire on top of the mountain. They all started capering off into the trees and up through the mountain like crazy men. Once i followed and caught up they had a huge mount of wood. Once the fire was lit they were all capering around it.
There was no smoke coming up from it, it was not working I told them that they should get green wood it always works so they all ran off to get more wood. The second time it would not lite so Jack took my specs and tryed to light it a.gain, still no smoke. The fire turned out not to be a success
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4 comments:
I really like you second paragraph, how you talked about the snake-like beastie. I also liked how you said that none the boys listened to them. Because if someone told us that they have seen a beastie, we would have just thought that it was a nightmare and not really care about it.
I like how you said they went thought the trees like crazy people and how you keep on the fire to show how the kids were going carzy like a pyro.
hey i think your suipposex to be a number 1 not a three
I like how u described everything, how there wasnt enough smoke, so they had to get green wood. u probably should have mentioned the little boy with the birthmark though.
hey sorry nevermind i was wrong, you did do the right person
hahah
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